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Season 5 Episode 34 Proofreading
« on: April 22, 2017, 11:47:45 AM »
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Re: Season 5 Episode 34 Proofreading
« Reply #1 on: April 22, 2017, 11:12:01 PM »
4:20
I have a special way to deal with you.
(extraordinary seems a bit exaggerated)

4:46
You said before that the Giant Phantom is based on the human nature of fear.

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SHAOYU'S BLIND OMG

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Re: Season 5 Episode 34 Proofreading
« Reply #2 on: April 23, 2017, 06:12:32 AM »
9:21 - enjoyed yourself enough?
9:24 - consequences for offending

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