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Season 5 Episode 33 Proofreading
« on: April 21, 2017, 12:13:00 PM »
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Re: Season 5 Episode 33 Proofreading
« Reply #1 on: April 21, 2017, 04:01:44 PM »
6:31 - "using smoke to run away"
14:32 - "closing his eyes"
14:34 - "Only Shaoyu can come up"

Otherwise looks good :)

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Re: Season 5 Episode 33 Proofreading
« Reply #2 on: April 22, 2017, 01:22:00 AM »
14:06
From the looks of this,

16:45
Iím in a mindset to bring nothing now.

16:55
Thereís only one thing that I carry with me.

17:48
Being wounded? Dying?

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