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Re: Season 5 Episode 32 Proofreading
« on: April 19, 2017, 04:45:24 AM »
Episode 32 Corrections:

5:16 - Although not required, I think "experimented men" would be better as "experimental subjects" or simply "experiments"
5:38 - same as above
5:54 - ... same
7:18 - same -_-
7:39 - "you have the only opportunity"
7:59 -  (you know the drill)

Overall, it looked really good

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