6:41 - 6:43
As long as you can live through this, you will become an obedient child. (a good boy who listens is kinda repetitive)
The young master of the Xiang family is indeed gifted.
You, go and reinforce some of his chains.
Special subjects deserve special treatment. (experimented, again, is kinda of repetitive since we know Shaoyu's been experimented on at this point. Besides, without experimented, the sentence flows better I think.)
This is your only opportunity. Get Shi Lan out of here.
A Ghost Manipulation Pill controls men as if they were ghosts.
...without complaint. (There was an ellipsis instead of a full stop on the end of that sentence.)
It's...it's the Immortality Pill!
Are there any missing details that I haven't thought of?