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Season 5 Episode 31 Proofreading
« on: April 15, 2017, 01:36:15 PM »
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Proofreading is encouraged even after ten years. xD

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Re: Season 5 Episode 31 Proofreading
« Reply #1 on: April 15, 2017, 02:27:57 PM »
2:42 - 'missionary' means someone who travels to other countries to convert people. I think 'assasin' works better here
2:55 - "not changed for one bit"
12:11 - "hereby" should be "From this moment on," or "henceforth"
16:00 - "me defeating you"
17:25 - "determined to find Yue'er"
24:02 - "to continue to support and enjoy"

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Re: Season 5 Episode 31 Proofreading
« Reply #2 on: April 15, 2017, 11:54:52 PM »
2:42 - 'missionary' means someone who travels to other countries to convert people. I think 'assasin' works better here
When you noted about this, I stared at the screen for a while. xDDD I couldn't believe that I missed it, haha. Thanks for pointing it out.

The other two of your corrections are also in episode 30, so I will go and change those too. Thank you for always finding time to help out!

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Re: Season 5 Episode 31 Proofreading
« Reply #3 on: April 16, 2017, 01:43:11 AM »
The other two of your corrections are also in episode 30, so I will go and change those too. Thank you for always finding time to help out!

No Problem, always happy to help. I love this show (:

2:42 - 'missionary' means someone who travels to other countries to convert people. I think 'assasin' works better here

I just realized that I wrote "assassin" wrong in my correction

ahahaha fail -_-'

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Re: Season 5 Episode 31 Proofreading
« Reply #4 on: April 16, 2017, 01:51:21 AM »
xD I copied and pasted "assasin" and I THINK that I unconsciously fixed it. When I was writing back to you, I realized it was spelled wrong and went to check the video, only to find it correct. Haha. Anyway... I'm heading to sleep now. <3

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Re: Season 5 Episode 31 Proofreading
« Reply #5 on: April 20, 2017, 05:27:59 AM »
Everything seems fine in this episode :)

(Though I watched it twice because I was so happy at seeing Yue'er again.)

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