Author Topic: Season 5 Episode 30 Proofreading  (Read 1243 times)

0 Members and 1 Guest are viewing this topic.

Offline 5Water

  • Administrator
  • Big Mooncake
  • *****
  • Thank You
  • -Given: 333
  • -Receive: 257
  • Posts: 401
    • View Profile
Season 5 Episode 30 Proofreading
« on: March 26, 2017, 11:59:56 AM »
Draft video: https://youtu.be/Xyq25W6CFZ4
Post comments at any given time here.

Ending song lyrics are only a rough draft, but I don't really care about it right now. Check it out if you want. Also, I forgot to add the singers' name as hard subs during the ending song, so I can make it again when you guys proofread. Thanks!

Offline Emraldr

  • Little Mooncake
  • **
  • Thank You
  • -Given: 107
  • -Receive: 71
  • Posts: 82
  • Secretly a pangolin
    • DeviantArt
    • View Profile
Re: Season 5 Episode 30 Proofreading
« Reply #1 on: March 27, 2017, 04:47:03 PM »
2:22 - Ying Zheng trusted
4:06 - leader have ever reached it
4:56 - heard the exact same words before
5:44 - i think it should be 'Princess Consort'
7:20 - i dream about the battlefield
7:30 - we lost the battle
7:39 - in refusal to surrender
8:28 - love for his nation
12:43 - duties have been
17:38 - get acquainted with

Follow members gave a thank to your post:


Offline 5Water

  • Administrator
  • Big Mooncake
  • *****
  • Thank You
  • -Given: 333
  • -Receive: 257
  • Posts: 401
    • View Profile
Re: Season 5 Episode 30 Proofreading
« Reply #2 on: March 27, 2017, 10:50:43 PM »
5:44 - i think it should be 'Princess Consort'

For some reason, sometimes I think she's a concubine (oh, I think it's because of her name Fei that could possibly mean imperial concubine), but since there's no clue about it, I'll change "Prince's Wife" to "Princess Consort" for the hard subs. Thanks!

Follow members gave a thank to your post:


Offline cynthaiz

  • Little Mooncake
  • **
  • Thank You
  • -Given: 17
  • -Receive: 94
  • Posts: 81
    • View Profile
Re: Season 5 Episode 30 Proofreading
« Reply #3 on: April 20, 2017, 05:30:06 AM »
4:38 – 4:48

Why have you not understood…the reason I can draw Momei…is because…I’m the current leader of the Mohist School?

Follow members gave a thank to your post:


Offline 5Water

  • Administrator
  • Big Mooncake
  • *****
  • Thank You
  • -Given: 333
  • -Receive: 257
  • Posts: 401
    • View Profile
Re: Season 5 Episode 30 Proofreading
« Reply #4 on: April 20, 2017, 10:13:20 PM »
4:38 – 4:48

Why have you not understood…the reason I can draw Momei…is because…I’m the current leader of the Mohist School?
Oh, should have realized that there should be a question mark. xD Thanks! Your name has been added to the credits in the subs and in the video description. ^.^