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Season 5 Episode 28 Proofreading
« on: February 12, 2017, 11:51:43 AM »
Qin's Moon S5 ep. 28 draft video ready at: https://youtu.be/9sRBfrvAWLw
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Re: Season 5 Episode 28 Proofreading
« Reply #1 on: February 13, 2017, 01:02:26 AM »
6:23 - "confuse us about the number..."
7:50 - "In order to survive, the Chief showed no regard for the lives of these slaves"
8:33 - "the army of slaves is in disorder"

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Re: Season 5 Episode 28 Proofreading
« Reply #2 on: February 17, 2017, 11:40:54 AM »
6:23 - "confuse us about the number..."
7:50 - "In order to survive, the Chief showed no regard for the lives of these slaves"
8:33 - "the army of slaves is in disorder"

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Re: Season 5 Episode 28 Proofreading
« Reply #3 on: April 21, 2017, 01:10:24 AM »
5:34
Yes, sir!

6:48
General, they donít seem to be associated with the Northern Wolves.

7:20 Ė 7:24
However, the flying spear from before and their imitation of our roaring give away their uncertainty.

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