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Season 5 Episode 40 Proofreading
« on: June 04, 2017, 01:15:36 PM »
Season 5 episode 40 draft video: https://youtu.be/O3rzA3MZwHI

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Re: Season 5 Episode 40 Proofreading
« Reply #1 on: June 04, 2017, 08:23:04 PM »
4:10 - I can do whatever I want to.
5:56 - ... of the King of Yue (unless there is not enough space to add anything)
8:10 - He would rob the rich and the powerful people...
8:27 - he has never been caught
11:59 - a lot more leads behind it
15:47 - it is admirable and praiseworthy (the credible here means believable. I assume you meant the expression "to your credit" which means it indicates that you did a good thing so I replaced it with praiseworthy)

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Re: Season 5 Episode 40 Proofreading
« Reply #2 on: June 04, 2017, 11:32:10 PM »
15:47 - it is admirable and praiseworthy (the credible here means believable. I assume you meant the expression "to your credit" which means it indicates that you did a good thing so I replaced it with praiseworthy)
Oh, I didn't give that translation by flycrane01 much look. I thought it was kind of strange at first, but since you had looked through it once, I assumed it was okay. xD

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Re: Season 5 Episode 40 Proofreading
« Reply #3 on: June 08, 2017, 06:02:00 AM »
3:16
whose speciality is the Wind Chaser.

4:06
...the Empire's army?

5:54
... whom is also...

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Re: Season 5 Episode 40 Proofreading
« Reply #4 on: June 08, 2017, 11:05:33 PM »
3:16
whose speciality is the Wind Chaser.

The "speciality" world was spelled wrong. It should be "specialty" right? xD If it is, I already changed it edited it to specialty. If it wasn't, just let me know. Because I could be mistaken too. Thanks!

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Re: Season 5 Episode 40 Proofreading
« Reply #5 on: June 09, 2017, 10:08:26 AM »
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It should be "specialty" right?

My bad! Yep, that's what I meant.

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Re: Season 5 Episode 40 Proofreading
« Reply #6 on: June 09, 2017, 10:12:25 AM »
It's alright. xD Thank you very much, cynthaiz!