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Re: Episodes Translation for "9 Songs of the Moving Heavens"
« Reply #75 on: May 20, 2017, 02:36:05 AM »
12:12 - "freezing" not "frezzing"
Opps. LOL I should really start looking closely because I often click the "accept/approve" button in google docs without thinking at all. xDDD

Also, the Three Wolves part is now translated as "The Three Hairless Wolves."

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Re: Episodes Translation for "9 Songs of the Moving Heavens"
« Reply #76 on: May 20, 2017, 10:04:43 AM »
Episode 16

5:21
...Office, which has trained many assassins.

5:25
...names, only codenames based off various birds.

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Re: Episodes Translation for "9 Songs of the Moving Heavens"
« Reply #77 on: May 27, 2017, 08:36:01 PM »
Episode 17

7:49 - mountain is spelled wrong
8:41 - I suggest replacing "take" with "place"
11:20 I suggest replacing "ending" with "reward"

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Re: Episodes Translation for "9 Songs of the Moving Heavens"
« Reply #78 on: May 31, 2017, 12:10:04 PM »
Episode 17 looks fine to me.

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Re: Episodes Translation for "9 Songs of the Moving Heavens"
« Reply #79 on: June 04, 2017, 08:43:26 PM »
Episode 18:
2:52 - experienced countless deaths
5:26 - was killed instead
7:16 - from of this
7:23 - just by for this advice

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Re: Episodes Translation for "9 Songs of the Moving Heavens"
« Reply #80 on: June 08, 2017, 05:43:04 AM »
Episode 18

4:06
...there will always be a time when they...

4:59
while also letting him help me find that lost treasure.

13:01
He has prepared a big gift for the General's Office.

13:09
When you find out, inform me.

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Re: Episodes Translation for "9 Songs of the Moving Heavens"
« Reply #81 on: June 14, 2017, 11:46:54 AM »
Episode 19 looks fine to me.

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Re: Episodes Translation for "9 Songs of the Moving Heavens"
« Reply #82 on: June 14, 2017, 11:41:50 PM »
Episode 19:

5:34 - "Everything is one person short of completion."

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Re: Episodes Translation for "9 Songs of the Moving Heavens"
« Reply #83 on: June 20, 2017, 10:26:18 AM »
Episode 20

4:56
From today onwards...

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Re: Episodes Translation for "9 Songs of the Moving Heavens"
« Reply #84 on: June 21, 2017, 05:07:54 AM »
Everything looked fine in episode 20

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