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Season 5 Episode 43 Proofreading
« on: June 23, 2017, 04:07:05 PM »

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Re: Season 5 Episode 43 Proofreading
« Reply #1 on: June 25, 2017, 02:05:36 AM »
14:10
I'd think you had thought it over during the years.

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Re: Season 5 Episode 43 Proofreading
« Reply #2 on: June 26, 2017, 03:44:33 AM »
7:27 - "is this a part of the ...
10:33 - I thought we changed this to "...can be clever but made a foolish mistake"
14:10 - I'd think you would have thought it over during the years.

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Re: Season 5 Episode 43 Proofreading
« Reply #3 on: June 27, 2017, 02:00:34 AM »
10:33 - I thought we changed this to "...can be clever but made a foolish mistake"

I can't recall who was the first and last person to make the edits for ep. 43. xDDD I can look at the history of the edits, but it doesn't matter. I will change it to "Ying Zheng can be clever but made a foolish mistake." Sounds about right, yes?

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Re: Season 5 Episode 43 Proofreading
« Reply #4 on: June 27, 2017, 02:56:54 AM »

I can't recall who was the first and last person to make the edits for ep. 43. xDDD I can look at the history of the edits, but it doesn't matter. I will change it to "Ying Zheng can be clever but made a foolish mistake." Sounds about right, yes?
sounds right

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Re: Season 5 Episode 43 Proofreading
« Reply #5 on: June 27, 2017, 11:07:22 PM »