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Re: Episodes Translation for "9 Songs of the Moving Heavens"
« Reply #90 on: July 23, 2017, 03:48:43 AM »
Episode 23:

6:06 - ...are deeply rooted there
7:31 - 'asking' doesnt make sense in this context. I think 'punishing' fits better

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Re: Episodes Translation for "9 Songs of the Moving Heavens"
« Reply #91 on: July 25, 2017, 07:37:05 AM »
Episode 24

5:10 - 5:14
Though I am now no longer a commander of the Han state, I cannot allow...

9:39
It has truly been hard on you, Lord Li...

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Re: Episodes Translation for "9 Songs of the Moving Heavens"
« Reply #92 on: July 30, 2017, 04:43:51 AM »
Episode 24 looks fine to me.

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Re: Episodes Translation for "9 Songs of the Moving Heavens"
« Reply #93 on: August 05, 2017, 12:34:54 AM »
Episode 25 looks fine to me.

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Re: Episodes Translation for "9 Songs of the Moving Heavens"
« Reply #94 on: August 05, 2017, 01:18:57 PM »
Episode 25:

6:02 - "Let's search in case there's anything else to find"
9:00 - a gift for me
13:18 - herd all the corpses...

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Re: Episodes Translation for "9 Songs of the Moving Heavens"
« Reply #95 on: August 09, 2017, 04:48:25 AM »
Episode 26 looks fine to me.

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Re: Episodes Translation for "9 Songs of the Moving Heavens"
« Reply #96 on: August 18, 2017, 08:44:20 AM »
Episode 27

7:22
How dare you trespass into the court!

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Re: Episodes Translation for "9 Songs of the Moving Heavens"
« Reply #97 on: August 18, 2017, 11:14:59 AM »
Episode 26:

12:49 - yet speak of home

Episode 27"

7:04 - places
11:44 - weaken your troops
11:56 - replace unknown with uncertain

......soooo I finally proofread these chapters...... >.< sorry

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