Season 5 Episode 38 Proofreading

[5Water]

Draft video: https://youtu.be/zqav-DRjV6w

Post your thoughts here. Thanks!

[cynthaiz]

9:37
Do not use "brother" so sparingly.

[Emraldr]

2:09 - has already set out
5:22 - doesn't mean you can talk...
6:40 - but I didn't know...
7:15 - this would still happen
9:22 - the calluses on his steady hands indicate
9:38 - "sparingly" means to not do something often. I think it should be replaced by "lightly" because he is telling him to not use the term so casually
12:44 - blinded by the fury
15:28 - just a bait

[5Water]

9:38 - "sparingly" means to not do something often. I think it should be replaced by "lightly" because he is telling him to not use the term so casually

Alright, I changed it to "lightly" I didn't have to write this, but I thought it'll be a quick note anyway. xD