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Season 5 Episode 35 Proofreading
« on: April 27, 2017, 12:33:01 PM »
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Re: Season 5 Episode 35 Proofreading
« Reply #1 on: April 27, 2017, 05:55:38 PM »
12:55 - "Hall Leader Zhu, do you want to play too?" (get rid of the extra comma)

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Re: Season 5 Episode 35 Proofreading
« Reply #2 on: April 28, 2017, 08:24:26 AM »
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This girl really is...not good. If this continues...

18:37
Four of the rebels...apparently,

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