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Season 5 Proofreading
« on: September 23, 2017, 05:38:57 PM »
Episode 53 Draft Video: https://youtu.be/xPJtodyn_x0

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Re: Season 5 Proofreading
« Reply #1 on: September 23, 2017, 11:23:50 PM »
Episode 53

3:59 - 4:05
That army relies heavily on their infantry, with their cavalry supporting it, similar to the former state of Wei's military soldiers.

4:29
However, after Ghost Valley disciple Sun Bin had enticed the enemy's main force...

9:46
Though we may be opponents, we are ultimately still brothers.

Gao Jianli's freezing move reminds me of Katara's when she froze Azula in the last season of Avatar

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Re: Season 5 Proofreading
« Reply #2 on: September 24, 2017, 12:12:21 PM »
9:46
Though we may be opponents, we are ultimately still brothers.

Thanks for this edit! I just couldn't think of something as close as what was said in Chinese. xD It sounds close to me.

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Re: Season 5 Proofreading
« Reply #3 on: September 25, 2017, 07:43:40 PM »
Episode 53:

16:43 - "...were in front."
16:52 - "not a good idea..."

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Re: Season 5 Proofreading
« Reply #4 on: September 29, 2017, 04:33:11 PM »
Episode 54:

4:04 - "...and won't fight properly."
4:17 - "... Young Master fall into the water so easily."
5:45 - "...depart for the..."
16:36 - "...half of the power of the Six Halls is in..."


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Re: Season 5 Proofreading
« Reply #5 on: September 30, 2017, 04:53:55 AM »
Episode 54

4:05
...and won't fight properly.

8:47
However, we won't be able to see her right now.

16:18
...or do you want to prove...