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Season 5 Episode 52 Proofreading
« on: September 08, 2017, 05:35:59 PM »

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Re: Season 5 Episode 52 Proofreading
« Reply #1 on: September 09, 2017, 01:24:59 PM »
3:05 - "ranked the 5th"
7:40 - "may be our last resort"
12:01 - "caught him unawares"

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Re: Season 5 Episode 52 Proofreading
« Reply #2 on: September 13, 2017, 06:57:49 AM »
4:24
...in the hopes of finding a cure.

5:03
Did you hesitate because you were...

5:31
...arts are a far cry from those of the Central Plains, too.

6:05
...Tou Man was wary of them.

7:20
I'm afraid the people of the Chiyou Hall are not so keen on seeing you...

8:05
...which would be costly.

8:35
...hoping for the knots in the Peasant School to become messier.

11:04
...to leave for the Six Sages Tomb...

11:13
...Tian Hu is currently occupied with something more urgent than the Mohists.

11:59
...caught him off-guard with...

12:04 - 12:07
He directly confronts the attack despite his disadvantageous position, and yet counters the powerful blow easily.

12:18
...are just like how Master Xu described them.

12:23
...Mo Ye were a beloved couple who were masters at forging...

12:26
Just asking, but did we ever translate Yuan Hong, or leave it as it was?
Maybe put a reminder at the corner of the screen?

12:40
That is the most distinguishing point about their swords.

13:11
Nothing wrong, just wanted to let you guys know how much I loved that sudden rock music that came up around this time - reminds me of Dynasty Warriors haha

13:35
I can spin too!
(He seems excited, so I think the exclamation point is needed.)

14:01
...Mo Ye were strong enough...

14:13
Later on, the couple, along with the King of Chu, who had ordered...

14:20
They are the most dangerous amongst the top 10 swords.

14:47
...can fight for this long is because...

17:14
...he wouldn't be able to stop him either.

17:31
Yes, I do!
(Because he's back to being excited.)

17:47
You look strong. Quick, show me your moves now!

17:51
...there's no way we can escape...

18:00
...Dize 24 Array is...

18:03
...it will be deadly for us.

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Re: Season 5 Episode 52 Proofreading
« Reply #3 on: September 14, 2017, 12:44:26 AM »
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12:26
Just asking, but did we ever translate Yuan Hong, or leave it as it was?
Maybe put a reminder at the corner of the screen?
I don't know if I should add a reminder in the corner because there are lots of things people may have forgotten too... :afro: So, maybe not??? Also, Yuan Hong was translated as Rainbow Abyss back and forth in the previous seasons. I didn't think it would matter.

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Nothing wrong, just wanted to let you guys know how much I loved that sudden rock music that came up around this time - reminds me of Dynasty Warriors haha
I love it too. I don't know if I can recall it or not, but I believe that OST first came on when Dai Zhi and Baifeng were fighting for the first time in season 2. xDDD

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Re: Season 5 Episode 52 Proofreading
« Reply #4 on: September 14, 2017, 02:26:23 AM »
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Also, Yuan Hong was translated as Rainbow Abyss back and forth in the previous seasons. I didn't think it would matter.

Which is why I think having a reminder would be good. Even I forgot what Yuan Hong was for a moment, because personally I had always remembered Yuan Hong as Rainbow Abyss.

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Re: Season 5 Episode 52 Proofreading
« Reply #5 on: September 14, 2017, 10:30:04 PM »
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Also, Yuan Hong was translated as Rainbow Abyss back and forth in the previous seasons. I didn't think it would matter.

Which is why I think having a reminder would be good. Even I forgot what Yuan Hong was for a moment, because personally I had always remembered Yuan Hong as Rainbow Abyss.
A note about that was already mentioned back in episode 7. (I remembered it just now, but I had to go look for it. xD)

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Re: Season 5 Episode 52 Proofreading
« Reply #6 on: September 15, 2017, 05:15:09 AM »
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A note about that was already mentioned back in episode 7.

Oh okay then, no need for a note in this episode then.