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Re: Season 5 Episode 31 Proofreading
« on: April 15, 2017, 02:27:57 PM »
2:42 - 'missionary' means someone who travels to other countries to convert people. I think 'assasin' works better here
2:55 - "not changed for one bit"
12:11 - "hereby" should be "From this moment on," or "henceforth"
16:00 - "me defeating you"
17:25 - "determined to find Yue'er"
24:02 - "to continue to support and enjoy"

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