Episodes Translation for "9 Songs of the Moving Heavens"

[Emraldr]

Episode 23:

6:06 - ...are deeply rooted there
7:31 - 'asking' doesnt make sense in this context. I think 'punishing' fits better

[cynthaiz]

Episode 24

5:10 - 5:14
Though I am now no longer a commander of the Han state, I cannot allow...

9:39
It has truly been hard on you, Lord Li...

[Emraldr]

Episode 24 looks fine to me.

[cynthaiz]

Episode 25 looks fine to me.

[Emraldr]

Episode 25:

6:02 - "Let's search in case there's anything else to find"
9:00 - a gift for me
13:18 - herd all the corpses...

[cynthaiz]

Episode 26 looks fine to me.

[cynthaiz]

Episode 27

7:22
How dare you trespass into the court!

[Emraldr]

Episode 26:

12:49 - yet speak of home

Episode 27"

7:04 - places
11:44 - weaken your troops
11:56 - replace unknown with uncertain

......soooo I finally proofread these chapters...... >.< sorry

[cynthaiz]

Episode 28 looks fine to me.

[cynthaiz]

Episode 29

4:43
The prison break...

5:18
...he was quite gifted...

5:21
He liked attracting people...

5:47
He eventually vanished under mysterious circumstances.

9:43
The one who freed him. Are they not afraid of vengeance?

10:21
...from this is not the Fourth Prince...

13:49
Hatred is an excellent weapon.

[Emraldr]

Episode 28

3:11 - Although not necessary, I think you should remove the "big". "An interesting big gift" sounds a bit clunky. "an interesting gift" sounds better imo.

wow, the Crown Prince's voice is so annoying. Makes me want to punch his face when he talks.

Episode 29

2:41 - same comment as in episode 28
8:53 - "The last man who spoke those words was turned to ashes."
13:04 - "If you are clever enough, you'd know it's best not to bargain at this time."
14:26 - "...putting in some effort"

sorry for the late response. I will try to be more on time from now on. I have no excuse

[5Water]

wow, the Crown Prince's voice is so annoying. Makes me want to punch his face when he talks.

*laughing and clapping my hands* xD

sorry for the late response. I will try to be more on time from now on. I have no excuse

Please don't ever think that way. DX Everyone is free from doing what they need to get done. Take your time whenever you need to. ^.^

[cynthaiz]

Episode 30

5:48
The General commanded that we must have faithful cooperation to bring about a solution to the crisis...
(I'm not sure if 'faithful' is accurate enough to replace 'dedicatedly')

10:13
...specialized in sorcery, but also the Art of War.

11:40
...of the Central Plains.
I've always thought (from watching other wuxia series) that this region was referred to as the 'Central Plains', but this is just something minor that I've noticed.

[5Water]

11:40
...of the Central Plains.
I've always thought (from watching other wuxia series) that this region was referred to as the 'Central Plains', but this is just something minor that I've noticed.

Without the "s" should be fine. Some books didn't add it. And some websites do... xD

[cynthaiz]

Without the "s" should be fine.

Alright, then let's just leave it as Central Plain.